Will each one of these relationships be very clear towards visitor?

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Lucina:
With that being said, he has bad anxiety and some issues that make us fight often.
(14 April 2017)

Lucina:
From the moment i met him i had a feeling i may Marry him.
(14 April 2017)

Lucina:
I've been with him a year and a half..and we have a wedding planned in 6 months.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
Is it really too hard to find someone to talk or discuss?
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
Please anyone, who is willing to talk?
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I believe in communicating the things with healthy mind set.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I need people to communicate, as it's in my behavior.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I am wondering why it's too hard to find someone to talk at least.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
No one to talk, or discuss the things to get someone's opinion.
(14 April 2017)

Alethea:
I don't have friends at all, i am all alone.
(14 April 2017)