This memoir could have used another pass by a line editor or proof reader

Thanks so much for being on the blog tour. Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. In the old days, hookups were a lot simpler, a lot more discrete. Darkness encroaches upon our lives through politics, through economics, and through civil unrest.
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Arlette:
She says if I go I can't be cranky or annoyed about it but if I don't go I have to pay her 190 dollars for the suit rental fee.
(25 October 2016)

Arlette:
I know I might sound heartless but I have my reasons for not wanting to go.
(25 October 2016)

Arlette:
Her weddings in a week and she just started listening to me when I say I don't want to go.
(25 October 2016)

Arlette:
I've told her for the last several months I don't want to go or be part of her wedding she ignored me and rented me a suit.
(25 October 2016)

Arlette:
I'm 15 and my moms getting remarried she's a very manipulative and controlling person.
(25 October 2016)

Angelica:
What's something that you like to talk about?
(25 October 2016)

Oretha:
Im only 13 and feel empty?
(25 October 2016)

Onie:
I miss my ex and I'm in a relationship with another guy?
(25 October 2016)

Onie:
What is the right thing for me to do?
(25 October 2016)

Onie:
I want to do the right thing but I feel so sad and empty right now and missing the ex.
(25 October 2016)